This is not the beginning of my novel. Just a bit of what I've written to...

[Crazy Beautiful]

...introduce my 3 characters.? The warm bath did nothing to relieve Liz's nerves. It had been 2 days since she witnessed her best friend Natalie murder her boyfriend Brad. The look on Brad's face as Natalie dashed towards him with a butcher knife kept replaying in her head. Her body was still in shock as if it was happening again and again. Natalie was calling Liz's cell phone nonstop for the past 2 days. So much that Liz had just turned her phone off. Which forced Natalie to call her house. Liz had informed her mom to tell everyone who called she was sleeping and not feeling well. Tomorrow Liz would have to face her best friends Casey and Natalie in school tomorrow. She really didn't want to. She thought about pretending to be sick or even transferring which was impossible since they only had a few months left in school before graduation. Anything not to face the girls who she thought she knew so well. Two cold blooded murderers. She realised she couldn't run from them forever and her best option would be to put everything behind her. Act normal so that they wouldn't expect her of telling the police all that she saw. Something Liz thought to do. Quickly deciding against it. She knew Casey and Natalie probally had some back up plan to frame her. Casey was the spoiled, rich girl who cared about nothing but her appearance. Very shallow and a bit of a narcissist. Natalie came from a broken home. Alcoholic mother and absent father who only paid child support but no visits. Her dad had moved to the east coast and made a new life and new family without even considering to let Natalie meet her younger siblings. Natalie felt a void in her life. She was missing a man. She craved male attention since she lost her virginity at twelve. Boys had always been her top priority. She tried to convince Casey and Liz to have sex as well. Casey actually gave in and lost her virginity at 15. Liz was still a virgin although she pretended not to be to avoid the constant pressure from Casey and Natalie. Liz's mom and dad were strict in a good way and it reflected in Liz. Liz always kept her grades up and was active in cheerleading as well
Lol I am going to introduce them first thanx I'm just trying to give u guys an idea of what I have in mind..the story will not play out like this
Thanks alot George I will gladly accept that advice

 

[It's true]

Very smart to introduce them through the story's conflict.